Language and Journalism Task 1
The most current trending story in the country in these past few days are
the leaks of the exchanged messages between Labour MP Rosianne Cutajar and Yorgen Fenech. These went out in Public
and all the country are talking about these messages. News portals have been
covering this story in a detailed manner with latest developments and updates.
Times Of Malta, Lovin Malta , Malta Today and Newsbook have been covering this
story from all angles.
First of all, the article published by the Times Of Malta about this manner
begins with a lead that summarizes the article's main points and the most
recent information. Also, it is only one sentence long, which is a great lead
in to the paragraph. The article is just text; there are no features or videos
included. Their writing is highly informative in the beginning. They provide
some useful information about the story's core idea and what will happen next
in the piece. The statement of Cutajar's attorneys is quoted in the following
paragraph, and the paragraph after that similarly uses an indirect quote
transition because Madam Grima's ruling is mentioned along with her comments
without any direct quotes. Another transition found below, this time it's a
direct quote since they are citing article 517 of the criminal code, which
could indicate a violation of these codes' restrictions.
Further information regarding this case will be revealed by TOM in the next
paragraph. They are providing this sensitive material because they want the
general public to be aware of the relevant facts surrounding this case and
their importance to the public good. The article's main focus is providing a
thorough explanation of the case and what has occurred and is occurring in
court. Another section on rights violations and urgent hearings concludes the
article. Since the most crucial piece of the statement, "chat transcripts,"
is being quoted in the violation of rights, there is a Partial Quote
Transition. Urgent Hearing is what Cutajar’s lawyers requested for, and the
article finishes with all these proven facts of the consquences and fundamental
rights which the population has to know about. This article is written as
Journalistic Writing since it’s enitrely factual and it’s primarily to give
information.
The following article, this time from Lovin Malta, does not contain a lead
at the start of the paragraph, indicating that their writing style is different
from that of the Times Of Malta piece. The case and the story are briefly
introduced in the first paragraph. Instead of offering any direct quotations
from the lawyers or any fresh information regarding this case, they keep
writing facts. Since there is important and sensitive information There is a
transition, which is disclosed in the following sentence.
No videos or features are included in this article. Transitions predominate
in this paragraph because there is an indirect quote in the following paragraph
and the journalist describes the lawyer's intervention to get Camilleri
imprisoned in their own terms. Another Direct Quote transition is there as it
states, "Cutajar has also claimed that she is considering taking action
against Camilleri for violating her right to privacy." This article is
concise but clear and accurate because of the way it is written. In a very
simplistic way, the author also provides information that is of public interest.
There are the constructed details, but it is not as detailed as the Times Of
Malta piece. This article falls under the literary writing because, in my
opinion, it is written with a specific audience in mind.
Contrary to the Lovin Malta article but similar to the Times Of Malta
piece, the MaltaToday story begins with a lead, which in this case is crucial because it
provides a summary of the article and the main idea. Rosianne Cutajar and
Mark Camilleri are mentioned as the main protagonists in the first line, along
with the claimed conversations that author Mark Camilleri is said to have made
public. When the author describes the acts of Cutajar's attorneys in his own
words, there is an indirect quote transition instantly in the following
paragraph. The court should take action against these chats since they are
interfering with her private life, according to information that was provided
to them and that was declared in court, they report in the next paragraph.
The facts that must be stated in order for the general public to fully
comprehend this court case are stated in the next paragraph. The public is
interested in knowing the most recent facts about this delicate case, thus they
have recently been releasing new information in the morning that Cutajar
herself handed the letter with the assistance of her attorneys. Now that they
are quoting straight from the letter to the attorney general, there
is a transitioning to a direct quote. The citations continue for a
few more paragraphs before ending with another transition, this time an Indirect
Quote because he is once more restating the arguments made in the application
in his own words. There are also details about the figures that Camilleri could
face if found guilty, which amounts to €2,329.37. This article is written in a
journalistic style because it is short, factual, and direct in its information
to the audience.
Similar to Lovin Malta, however unlike Times Of Malta and MaltaToday, this Newsbook story has no lead at the beginning, which prohibits the reader from getting a
sense of the story. This article is missing a video or any other feature. The
story immediately with an Indirect Quote transition as it is stating the
comments from Rosianne Cutajar to the Attorney General about the leaked chats
with Yorgen Fenech on WhatsApp. They continue to prove facts about the case as
they mention news that is relevant with the case. There is a transition as
there is a brief summary of the text is coming in the direct quotes in the
following section. As mentioned before, Camilleri's assertion in the form of a
direct citation opens the following sentence.
The following section also contains a transition; this time it is a partial
quote transition because they are citing parts of Cutajar's application
indirectly. The transition stays the same in the same paragraph as they are
partially quoting from the criminal code as stated in the text. We are now
seeing news on sums and facts as the author is mentioning the €2,329.37 total
that Camilleri could face if found guilty and the imprisonment of one month. They
are using an immediate transition once more since they are using a direct quote
from Cutajar's Lawyers. In the end they
are again writing about the criminal court and it’s handling about the
situation. This can be considered as journalistic writing as it short, factual
, simple and direct. Also the target audience is basically everyone as the
style of writing is factual and giving all the necessary details that the
Maltese population needs to know about.
References:
Agius, M., 2023. Malta
Today. [Online]
Available at: https://www.maltatoday.com.mt/news/national/121943/rosianne_cutajar_asks_criminal_court_ag_to_take_action_against_mark_camilleri_over_whatsapp_chats#.ZB2OsnbMJPa
[Accessed 21 March 2023].
Balzan, J., 2023. Newsbook. [Online]
Available at: https://newsbook.com.mt/en/labour-mp-demands-arrest-of-author-blogger-mark-camilleri/
[Accessed 20 March 2023].
Brincat, E., 2023. Times Of Malta. [Online]
Available at: https://timesofmalta.com/articles/view/rosianne-cutajar-demands-criminal-court-ag-take-action-leaked-chats.1020781
[Accessed 20 March 2023].
Vella, S., 2023. lovin Malta. [Online]
Available at: https://lovinmalta.com/malta/rosianne-cutajars-lawyers-ask-court-to-investigate-whether-mark-camilleri-leaking-whatsapp-chat-violated-law/
[Accessed 22 March 2023].
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